Karl (louderback) wrote in louderpoetry,
Karl
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2008.02.02 Visions

The triad is a specific form of tercet. The origins of the triad are Irish and Welsh. A triad is a poem composed of three tercets. It is a consideration of three things and their effect on a person. Welsh versions of the Arthurian legends make heavy use of this form.
Form: Enclosed tercets
Rhyme Scheme: aba bcb cdc

Visions

I often see what others see
Though seldom as they see it
I see instead that which might be.

On city sidewalks dimly lit
Chalk lines where children gather
Seem like a map unfinished yet.

Explanation seems a bother
My sight seems to me just fine
It's what I see that I prefer.

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